Man, I’m still kind of stunned over how well yesterday’s lines turned out. If it’s cool with you guys, I’m going to practice a little more with these new Best Direct Response Headlines and revisit an old list.
My last 5-hour Energy post fell a little short of expectations. Let’s see what building off a stronger base might do…
Here’s 5-hour Energy pt. 2:
| 1 | Most office coffee tastes like mud by mid-afternoon. But that’s when you need it most. |
| 2 | Give me the any job in the world, and I’ll show you to how to do it more productive |
| 3 | How to kick start mornings, power through afternoons, and still sleep at night |
| 4 | What would you do with 5 more productive hours every day? |
| 5 | To the parents who wish they could keep with their kids |
| 6 | If you’ve already been caught napping at your desk, don’t read this. It’ll make you feel foolish. |
| 7 | 5 powerful hours to a more productive day |
| 8 | The difference between 5-hour and the knockoffs is 5-hour actually works |
| 9 | Who else wants a more productive day? |
| 10 | Don’t drink another cup of coffee, until you’ve had 2 ounces of 5-hour |
| 11 | How 2 ounces of energy can keep you going for 5-whole hours |
| 12 | We always have 14 different flavors, 2 strengths and a decaf version of our energy shot |
| 13 | The difference between 5-hour and coffee, is that 5-hour tastes good at any temperature |
| 14 | What would become of your mornings, if you suddenly weren’t sluggish |
| 15 | For the woman who won’t settle for less quality time being awake throughout the day |
| 16 | New energy shots give you the energy to run 29 hours a day |
| 17 | Announcing a new way for adults to be more productive for 5-hours each day |
| 18 | To the men and women who want to keep up their children |
| 19 | What’s the best way to feel good all day? The power source may surprise you |
| 20 | To the modern day warrior who wants more power every day |
| 21 | No-name energy shots might never kick in. Ours start working the moment you drink it. |
| 22 | An easy way to make your day more productive |
| 23 | The premium gasoline of energy shots |
| 24 | Is it cheating to feel this good all day? |
| 25 | Days are better when you’re not tired |
| 26 | The same energy as the bigger cans, but without all the sugar and extra chemicals |
| 27 | How to increase your energy without changing a single thing about you |
| 28 | Energy drinks can be as big as 24 oz. Ours is only 2 |
| 29 | To the active adults who don’t have time to be tired |
| 30 | Tired is for the competition |
| 31 | Now you don’t have to go through the motions of being awake |
| 32 | Announcing a new catalyst for adults seeking an escape from tired |
| 33 | Now you don’t have to worry about keeping your pick-me-up hot or cold |
| 34 | The little bottle of energy that’s ready whenever you are |
| 35 | To the hardworking adult who wants nothing less than to be more productive each day |
| 36 | Almost everyone can use a more productive 5-hours. Here’s how to make it happen |
| 37 | Most energy drinks takes a while to kick in. Ours starts working the moment you swallow. |
| 38 | You may not feel sleepy now… But why wait until it’s too late? |
| 39 | 2 powerful ounces are the reason why energy levels are soaring |
| 40 | How to turn 2 oz. of energy into an afternoon of productivity |
| 41 | I’ve got 300 minutes of go-time with 5-hour Energy |
| 42 | For everyday people who want to achieve more |
| 43 | Turn yourself up to 11 |
| 44 | You may not be tired now, but I want you to drink this before it’s too late |
| 45 | In just a few minutes, you’ll have more energy than you knew possible |
| 46 | You’re not having another cup of coffee, are you? |
| 47 | You’ll never miss feeling tired |
| 48 | Make tired for other people |
| 49 | Would you believe I used to slough through afternoons? |
| 50 | How to develop an internal battery that will last for more hours, run clean, and never crash at the end |
| 51 | Now 2 ounces of energy pack the same wallop as 16 of the other guy’s |
| 52 | I’d like to give this to my fellow man… while he’s still awake to enjoy it |
| 53 | Now 24-hours will seem like more than enough time |
| 54 | Helping tired people perk up |
| 55 | Almost everyone hits a wall at 2:30. Here’s how to blast right through it. |
| 56 | You can be twice as productive at 2:30 than you were yesterday |
| 57 | Which athlete took the 5-hour? And which stuck with Gatorade? |
| 58 | All the energy you can handle—but never more |
| 59 | Is it really fair that being alert can be this easy? |
| 60 | Kiss tired goodbye |
| 61 | I’d like to give a bottle to any tired mom…before they fall asleep on duty |
| 62 | The 2 oz. energy shot that has fewer calories than a diet coke |
| 63 | How to turn your energy levels onto a higher gear |
| 64 | What’s the best way to stay alert? The answer may be smaller than your think |
| 65 | Like Red Bull, without the skateboards |
| 66 | You’ve never had it before, but I want you to see what not being tired feels like |
| 67 | A more productive day for hard-working adults |
| 68 | Who else wants to get through their day without an afternoon nap |
| 69 | Helping you get more out of your day, 5-hours at a time |
| 70 | You, at your best, all the time |
| 71 | Life is better when you’re awake |
| 72 | You’re twice as productive as normal with 5-hour |
| 73 | Would you believe I used to feel tired? |
| 74 | The difference between Red Bull & 5-hour is all the sugar |
| 75 | We sell the same amount of energy as a 16 oz. can, with 100% less sugar |
| 76 | We’re always available at every gas station, convenience store and grocery store nearby |
| 77 | Now! More energy without the sugar crash |
| 78 | A new energy drink that gives you a cleaner burn without the crash |
| 79 | Sugary energy drinks come in 16 oz. cans and cause you to crash. Ours comes in a 2 oz. bottle and doesn’t. |
| 80 | If you’ve been fighting tired all day, it’s time to change your pick-me-up |
| 81 | Don’t struggle through one more cup of burnt coffee until you try this energy shot |
| 82 | Tired strikes at the same time every day. Here’s how to prevent it. |
| 83 | Afternoons without the hump, if you’re a smart shopper |
| 84 | Which co-worker had the 5-hour? And which had plain ol’ coffee? |
| 85 | An easy way to get more energy |
| 86 | Coffee gives you a quick start. But your day lasts longer than your cup. |
| 87 | For a man who wants to feel like one million bucks, for only $2.99 |
| 88 | How to increase your stamina for daily wear-and-tear, without a single cup of coffee |
| 89 | Your low energy levels can be predicted—and prevented |
| 90 | Get a little more out of your day |
| 91 | When sleep seems far away, 5-hour makes it all OK |
| 92 | If you’ve already sloughed through your day, don’t read this. It’ll make you sad… |
| 93 | Give me any job at any hour of the day, and I’ll show you how I can be energetic while I work it |
| 94 | How to start mornings fast, make afternoons strong, and not feel tired until bedtime |
| 95 | What would your life be like if you had 5 more hours of energy? |
| 96 | Kicks tired to the curb! |
| 97 | I’m 2 ounces heavier & 5-hours better |
| 98 | Strop dragging through the day—and lift yourself up |
| 99 | Imagine your mornings if tired weren’t a factor |
| 100 | Life is better without a snooze button |
| 101 | All the power you need, at whatever temperature you’ve got ready |
Overall: They’re good, but I’m not as blown away as yesterday. I’d say some lines are really strong. Several others read a bit too much like a cheesy ad. Which is kind of 5-hour’s thing, so maybe…
Lessons: The lines I like best are the ones that built off the original template, but had my own spin on it. So I need to keep doing that. It’ll take a little more tinkering to get these into my system.
- A little clickbait-y at times—which is the challenge now that the great lines have been so commercialized
- I know this might not be as much fun to read as the others, but it’s all part of the growth process
- I wish I could share the list I’m working from with you, but it was part of a paid course. Otherwise I totally would.
Time: 45 minutes. These were quick since I was working directly from the template.
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