Alright, so yesterday we did a simple copy/paste edit for custom dress shirts. The results were mediocre at best. Even that might be a generous statement. Today, we’re going to do it right. We’re writing 100 headlines for Proper Cloth Custom Shirts and we’re putting forth as much effort as we normally do.
Let’s see how it goes, shall we?
(I have no idea why I’m saving “we.” It’s still just me. But I love that you’re here too.)
Here are 103 lines about Proper Cloth Dress Shirts:
| 1 | Picky taste with a limited-choice fit? |
| 2 | An unparalleled fit for unique bodies |
| 3 | Get an immaculate fit |
| 4 | The perfect shirt for you–no matter your size |
| 5 | Custom fit for you, but also for your partner |
| 6 | You’re going to look better than usual |
| 7 | Dress for the part you want |
| 8 | Tired of wearing shirts that only fit half your body? |
| 9 | The only thing better quality than our shirts, is our customer service |
| 10 | It takes a lot of work to make your shirt perfect. Luckily, we’re not afraid to do it. |
| 11 | When it comes to sizing, we understand the numbers |
| 12 | Shirts designed for you–and only you |
| 13 | Wear an oxford that makes you look smart |
| 14 | Start with one. The rest of your closet can wait. |
| 15 | Custom fits for not off-the-rack bodies |
| 16 | You don’t need to be fit to look good |
| 17 | You, upgraded |
| 18 | Baggy isn’t sexy |
| 19 | Every shirt will be your new favorite shirt |
| 20 | Good looking shirts that fit your perfect |
| 21 | When your body doesn’t conform to standard sizes, our shirts conform to you |
| 22 | The best way to feel good is to look good |
| 23 | Button up your style |
| 24 | You’re not still trying to look good off the rack are you? |
| 25 | The online shirt maker that understands your body is different |
| 26 | Your experience will be as buttoned down as your shirt |
| 27 | Tailored shirts, without a trip to the tailor |
| 28 | Don’t hide a poor-fitting shirt behind a jacket |
| 29 | Custom fit shirts for any type of body |
| 30 | If you have a hard time getting shirts to fit, we’ll fit the shirt to you |
| 31 | When you look like a gentleman, you act like a gentleman |
| 32 | Don’t think you can pull off a shirt like this? Think again. |
| 33 | Is it worth getting a tailored fit? Ask your mate. |
| 34 | You’ll never want to go back to loose and baggy again |
| 35 | Upgrade your look, top to bottom |
| 36 | For when you want a custom fit, but don’t want to leave the couch |
| 37 | We’re not sure why you’ve never had a shirt that fit this well either |
| 38 | Not just great shirts–great customer service |
| 39 | Consistent quality for your style upgrade |
| 40 | Custom shirts for men who look better with custom fits |
| 41 | We’ll make you look like a modern gentleman. The way you act is up to you. |
| 42 | The online custom tailor for great-fitting shirts |
| 43 | We keep our cuts close to the vest |
| 44 | The shirt that makes you look the way you want to look |
| 45 | These clothes make you look good |
| 46 | Bring out your inner confidence |
| 47 | Custom shirts for oddball bodies |
| 48 | Shirts measured so perfectly, there’s no room for improvement |
| 49 | This is going to be the best fitting shirt you’ve ever owned. |
| 50 | Doesn’t matter how you look naked, you’ll clean up well in our shirt |
| 51 | Custom fits from the comfort of your home |
| 52 | Build your perfect shirt |
| 53 | The confidence of our tailors is included in your shirt |
| 54 | Off the rack will never feel like this |
| 55 | Want a better shirt? |
| 56 | Designer fit for not-designer bodies |
| 57 | Custom fit for GQ looks |
| 58 | Look the way the ladies want |
| 59 | You’ve felt so good about looking good |
| 60 | You’re going to look forward to formal occasions |
| 61 | The perfect fit for imperfect bodies |
| 62 | Get a shirt that turns heads |
| 63 | Get a shirt that feels like you |
| 64 | For men who want to look their best |
| 65 | Who knew you could love a shirt this much |
| 66 | The best way to look good in pictures is to look good in real life |
| 67 | Take your look from pauper to prince |
| 68 | The perfect size for in-between sizes |
| 69 | We’ll take care of you from the neck down |
| 70 | Get everything you need to look good. The rest is up to you. |
| 71 | Just because you look good, doesn’t mean you can’t behave badly |
| 72 | No matter what size you are, we’ll tailor a perfect fit |
| 73 | All the essentials for looking your best |
| 74 | Best in class custom shirts |
| 75 | When you look good, you feel good |
| 76 | For people who have regular bodies that can’t seem to find great-fitting shirts |
| 77 | Looking this good gives you an excuse to act bad |
| 78 | We think custom shirts go way beyond choosing a color |
| 79 | Helping people who can’t buy off the rack, get the perfect shirt |
| 80 | Dress like a gentleman (even if you’re not) |
| 81 | Weird proportions? We can fit that. |
| 82 | Thick neck, big torso, wide arms? We’ve got a shirt for you |
| 83 | Change your look, change your life |
| 84 | Even if you’ve never found a shirt that’s fit you right, we guarantee our cut |
| 85 | We make wearing a suit and tie fun |
| 86 | Shirts that conform to your body – not the other way around |
| 87 | If you’ve got a body, we’ve got a shirt that fits it |
| 88 | Take your look from off-the-rack to back-in-black |
| 89 | Fitting shirts perfectly, one button at a time |
| 90 | When they compliment the shirt, they’re complimenting you |
| 91 | Where the average Joe meets the cover of GQ |
| 92 | It’s half how you feel, half how you look |
| 93 | People are going to notice how good you look |
| 94 | You’re going to notice how poorly made off-the-rack fit |
| 95 | Nothing fits you as well as sexy |
| 96 | Look your best, all the time |
| 97 | The best fit for oddball bodies |
| 98 | Custom shirts with a custom fit |
| 99 | Discover a style you never knew you could pull off |
| 100 | Dapper shirts for oddball bodies |
| 101 | The only downside is never wanting to go back to off-the-rack |
| 102 | The shirt that makes you feel like the cover of GQ |
| 103 | Our shirts are as quality as service |
Overall: Much better than yesterday. But I do have to say, it helped a great deal to have those lines already in my brain. I felt ready to go.
Lessons: Yesterday’s list was a good catalyst for the creativity. It makes me happy to know I’m putting all of this work in to the project. These can pay off in the future.
- The reviews were helpful in identifying themes, but less impactful for great lines than I was hoping.
- “Oddball bodies” was taken from a review. That’s not intended as an insult—but I thought it summed it up nicely
Time: 2 sessions, 1:15
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